Kaelriyu Online p2

First: [link]

Been a while since I posted to my gallery, but lately I just haven't had the heart and dedication to work on something of "high quality," so sorry 'bout that...

I actually started work on this about 3 weeks ago, but I showed it around and comments were universally negative, so I scrapped it. I've been getting requests to work on this more, and since I wasn't lynched for the quick and dirty linework on the last one, I figured I could get away with it again if it meant being able to get comics done in a reasonable time frame.

Any kind of clean coloring though with such dirty linework though is troublesome, and I wanted to color this... my first attempts to color it though weren't well received, the main reason it got scrapped. For now, flat colors only...